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Reargreen Posted 17 years ago
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Hello

Dear Sir



I would like to request permission for a leave of absence effective from to . Because im going to attend a family reunion in Pendicton and Tour Vacation.





Thank you very much for your kind assistance.

Yours faithfully
  

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reargreen: Welcome to the Forums! I have made some suggestions on your letter. Dear Sir I would like to request permission for a leave of absence effective from July 06, 2009 to July 16, 2009 b ecause I' m going to attend a family reunion in Pendicton and Tour take a few days of vacation.

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  • reargreen: Welcome to the Forums!
  • I have made some suggestions on your letter.
  • Dear Sir I would like to request permission for a leave of absence effective from July 06, 2009 to July 16, 2009 b ecause I' m going to attend a family reunion in Pendicton and Tour take a few days of vacation.
  • Please let me know if you approve.
  • Thank you very much for your kind assistance.
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reargreen: Welcome to the Forums!
I have made some suggestions on your letter.

Dear Sir



I would like to request permission for a leave of absence effective from July 06, 2009 to July 16, 2009 because I'm going to attend a family reunion in Pendicton and Tour take a few days of vacation.

Please let
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But please help me also to add in the second stanza...
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but any one here can help do the second stanza more word??
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Do you mean another paragraph?

I think your message is complete - you have told them when, why, and then another sentence asking for approval. That's all you need!

Best regards,
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