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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Helllooo

i was just wondering if you could make my thesis statement stronger.
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"After reading this story, I realized sometimes the things we want the most are the hardest things to achieve."
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I'd say this way: Having read this story,I realized that sometimes the thing we want the most are the hardest to achieve.

  • I'd say this way: Having read this story,I realized that sometimes the thing we want the most are the hardest to achieve.
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I'd say this way:
Having read this story,I realized that sometimes the thing we want the most are the hardest to achieve.

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