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Inchoateknowledge Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

heavy sentence

Original:

Millenium Dome chiefs have refused to discuss reports they ignored advice attendance figures at the attraction would be lower than hoped.

My interpetation:

Millenium Dome chiefs have refused to discuss reports (that) they ignored advice (that) attendance figures at the attraction would be lower than hoped.

Is it a correct interpretation of the sentence above?

And this one:

The Sunday Times says the Millenium Commission warned Dome owners the new Millenium Experience Company its own estimate was between 4.5m and 5m.

Have no idea.

Thanks
  

Top answer

" They won't discuss the reports. The reports say that they (the chiefs) ignored advice. The advice was that the attenendance would be lower than they had hoped.

  • " They won't discuss the reports.
  • The reports say that they (the chiefs) ignored advice.
  • The advice was that the attenendance would be lower than they had hoped.
  • 5 and 5 million.
  • And that they informed the Dome owners of these estimate.
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Lots of omitted "thats."

They won't discuss the reports. The reports say that they (the chiefs) ignored advice. The advice was that the attenendance would be lower than they had hoped.

I believe, with the second one, that the Millienium (aren't there two n's?) Commission had estimated between 4.5 and 5 million. And that they informed the Dome owners of these estimate. Is "the
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Original:

Millenium Dome chiefs have refused to discuss reports they ignored advice attendance figures at the attraction would be lower than hoped.

My interpetation:

Millenium Dome chiefs have refused to discuss reports (that) they ignored advice (that) attendance figures at the attraction would be lower than hoped. Yes.
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A Newcastle Brown Ale to GG and another one to Marius.
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Hi Incho

In my opinion both sentences are ungrammatical, which probably means I won't get a beer. Never mind, I don't particularly like Newcastle Brown Ale anyway.
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Grammar GeekMy favorite! Emotion: big smile
I knew that, but I will take back my promise if you put me into
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Well, I'll buy you a round myself, if you can keep from bickering Emotion: smile
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Newspaperese, perhaps; rather than ungrammatical.

MrP
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Grammar GeekWell, I'll buy you a round myself, if you can keep from bickering Emotion: smile
Aaahhhh! Thanks
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CB, do I have to be able to pronounce it to order it? Or can I just point? Emotion: wink

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