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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
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Heaven and gentleman
Heaven moving forward and forever, a gentleman shall strive along with perseverance!
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Ouch. Heaven doesn't move. 'Strive' is formal, 'along' is casual.
- Ouch.
- Heaven doesn't move.
- 'Strive' is formal, 'along' is casual.
- Let's see your revision, Jobb.
- Merry Christmas Eve.
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Ouch.
Heaven doesn't move.
'Strive' is formal, 'along' is casual.
Let's see your revision, Jobb.
Merry Christmas Eve.
Heaven doesn't move.
'Strive' is formal, 'along' is casual.
Let's see your revision, Jobb.
Merry Christmas Eve.
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How about:
Cosmos moving forward and forever, a gentleman shall strive unremittingly!
It is now the Christmas Eve; I'd not quote what Stephen Hawking said.
Cosmos moving forward and forever, a gentleman shall strive unremittingly!
It is now the Christmas Eve; I'd not quote what Stephen Hawking said.
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Ah, that's better. I'd set it more parallel: 'The cosmos moves... a gentlemen strives'.
Now, what did Stephen Hawking say?
Now, what did Stephen Hawking say?
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Our universe:
Singularity =
Your rewriting is poetic, thanks.
For fitting the original Chinese, I rewrite it as:
The cosmos moves vigorously, an
Singularity =
>>> Big Bang
=>>> the status quo of our universe =>>> collapse
=>>> singularity =>>> Big Bang (again!)
==>>>>....Your rewriting is poetic, thanks.
For fitting the original Chinese, I rewrite it as:
The cosmos moves vigorously, an
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'How about that?' Fine. I myself always think of the cosmos as moving relentlessly or inexorably, but I am a fatalistic sort of person... and not particularly a gentleman.
Yes, thank you-- I remember now-- he said the universe has strings attached.
Yes, thank you-- I remember now-- he said the universe has strings attached.
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