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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Health report - correction

Hi,

A female aged 42 years was referred to ***** hospital with massive abdominal pain during menses.

Firstly, please check the sentence. Secondly , usage of massive pain is relevant here?

- carthy
  

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Hi, Anonymous usage of massive pain is relevant here? Severe abdominal pain .... Sri

  • Hi, Anonymous usage of massive pain is relevant here?
  • Severe abdominal pain ....
  • Sri
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Hi,
Anonymous usage of massive pain is relevant here?
Severe abdominal pain ....

Sri
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Thanks for the help.

A female aged 42 years was referred to ** hospital with severe abdominal pain during menses.

Do you suggest any correction?

- carthy
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Hi,

I suggest:

A 42-year-old woman was referred to ----- Hospital with severe abdominal pain during menses.

There is a specific medical terminology for "abdominal pain during menses", can you try to re-write the entire sentence duly placing appropriate medical word?

Example:

A 42-year-old woman was referred to ----- Hospital with severe ___
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Mr.Rao,

A 42-year-old woman was referred to Teresa Hospital with severe dysmenorrhea.

Thanks for your help.

- carthy
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Hi,

Yes, it is fine.

With best wishes,

Sri

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