For me, the health is priceless. It is basically need for activity daily of people. If we have not the health, we will not to do everything. The wealth is one of significant part of the life but it is not indispensable. When we die, do you take your money? The answer evident is no. So why we have to spend time to running a race to get money? Do money make you happy more? I think that not. When a person absorbed get too much money, they just want to seek to forget their lonely. When someone consider money is top priority, it will too busy and do not have time for yourself. Instead of priority for money, we should spend time for exercise, build to eat and drink moderation to have a healthy way of living. The good health will make you brimful energy and help you optimistic more in life.
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You need to study basic English more. You make a lot of mistakes. I have given you advice on some of the writing.
For me, the health is priceless. (Health is a mass noun. We do not use an article.)
It is basically need for activity daily of people. (This is completely wrong.
Good health is needed for people to carry out their daily activities.)