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PreciousJones Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Health
Health and our energy level to me is probably the most important thing to a long and prosperous life, and it trumps everything else in life. Because without it, it's hard to continue on with a life without vigor.
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The following sentence is better: To me, good health is probably the most important contributor to a long, prosperous, and energetic life, because without it, one would be forced to continue living without vigor. It is redundant to use the most important and then it trumps everything else in the same sentence.
- The following sentence is better: To me, good health is probably the most important contributor to a long, prosperous, and energetic life, because without it, one would be forced to continue living without vigor.
- It is redundant to use the most important and then it trumps everything else in the same sentence.
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The following sentence is better:
To me, good health is probably the most important contributor to a long, prosperous, and energetic life, because without it, one would be forced to continue living without vigor.
It is redundant to use the most important and then it trumps e
To me, good health is probably the most important contributor to a long, prosperous, and energetic life, because without it, one would be forced to continue living without vigor.
It is redundant to use the most important and then it trumps e
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