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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Headline correctness
Hello,
I don't know whether my headline is correct or maybe there is a way to shorten it somehow. Thanks!
"10 problems companies face when dealing with clients that Microsoft solves"
I don't know whether my headline is correct or maybe there is a way to shorten it somehow. Thanks!
"10 problems companies face when dealing with clients that Microsoft solves"
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Anonymous "10 problems companies face when dealing with clients that Microsoft solves" This reads badly. It reads as if Microsoft solves the clients.
- Anonymous "10 problems companies face when dealing with clients that Microsoft solves" This reads badly.
- It reads as if Microsoft solves the clients.
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Anonymous"10 problems companies face when dealing with clients that Microsoft solves"This reads badly. It reads as if Microsoft solves the clients.
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