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Snarf Posted 14 years ago
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He then grabs Jesse’s collar with both hands, and speaks desperately, while tugging on it

Would that be better if "and speaks desperately" did not have commas around it?

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I think it would be better.

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I think it would be better.
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Somebody recommended to me that I take out the comma after "desperately" and put one after "collar" instead.
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SnarfSomebody recommended to me that I take out the comma after "desperately" and put one after "collar" instead.
Somebody has made a not very helpful suggestion.
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