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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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he spent a month of total solitude

When he felt he could not stand the terrible strain of the job any more, he spent a month of total solitude in a mountain village.





Does the above sound right, the bolded part in particular? If yes, how would you revise it? Thanks.
  

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Angliholic When he felt he could not stand the terrible strain of the job any more, he spent a month of total solitude in a mountain village. Does the above sound right, the bolded part in particular? If not , how would you revise it?

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  • Angliholic When he felt he could not stand the terrible strain of the job any more, he spent a month of total solitude in a mountain village.
  • Does the above sound right, the bolded part in particular?
  • If not , how would you revise it?
  • Thanks.
  • ' or ' he spent a month in a mountain village living in total solitude ' instead.
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AngliholicWhen he felt he could not stand the terrible strain of the job any more, he spent a month of total solitude in a mountain village.

Does the above sound right, the bolded part in particular? If not, how would you revise it?
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AngliholicWhen he felt he could not stand the terrible strain of the job any more, he spent a month of total solitude in a mountain village.

Does the above sound right, the bolded part in particular? If not, how would you revise it? Thanks.
Hi,

I prefer '
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