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Peaceblinkfriend Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

...he many contributions you can make to this cause..

Hi all

Is this sentence grammatical?

This is only one of the many contributions you can make to this cause you seem so deeply passionate about.

Thanks

PBF
  

Top answer

Yes, it's OK. But the tenor seems a bit off. This is only one of the many contributions you can make to this cause , which you seem so deeply passionate about.

— Mister Micawber

  • Yes, it's OK.
  • But the tenor seems a bit off.
  • This is only one of the many contributions you can make to this cause , which you seem so deeply passionate about.
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Yes, it's OK. But the tenor seems a bit off.

This is only one of the many contributions you can make to this cause, which you seem so deeply passionate about.
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Thanks for replying MM.

Just wondering. Would this sound more natural or both are commonly used?

This is only one of the many ways you can cointribute to this cause, which you seem so deeply passionate about.

Thanks again

PBF
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Yes, but 'contribute'.
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Thanks for replying MM. Just to be sure, it's a yes to the second version being more natural right?

Thank you again

PBF
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To me they seem about equally natural, PBF.
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