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Hoa Thai Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

He is sad, angry, and needing peace.

Hi,

Could we ignore the grammatical error of the sbject sentence for compactness?

Thanks,
Hoa Thai
  

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I don't think so, Hoa Thai-- but it may be just because the phrase 'needing peace' sounds a little odd. Actually, I don't think it is really a grammatical error; it is a rhetorical device often used by writers. Try: He is sad, angry, and in need of (a little) peace (and quiet).

  • I don't think so, Hoa Thai-- but it may be just because the phrase 'needing peace' sounds a little odd.
  • Actually, I don't think it is really a grammatical error; it is a rhetorical device often used by writers.
  • Try: He is sad, angry, and in need of (a little) peace (and quiet).
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I don't think so, Hoa Thai-- but it may be just because the phrase 'needing peace' sounds a little odd. Actually, I don't think it is really a grammatical error; it is a rhetorical device often used by writers. Try: He is sad, angry, and in need of (a little) peace (and quiet).

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I thought 'is' was being forced to carry a double duty. In the first construction, it is a linking verb - but in the second construction, it is an auxiliary verb. Hence, the entire sentence is grammatically questionable.

Thanks,
Hoa Thai
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I can see that it might be awkward sometimes, but calling it incorrect is. I think, overly prescriptive. Certainly it can be used to good effect: He was ill and seeking medical attention. I am in China and loving every minute of it.

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