He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails.
Do I have to put 'that' before 'entails'? No.
It's an awkward-sounding sentence. We don't normally say that something 'entails a duration'. Have you considered saying more simply He has pointed out the lengthy duration of this ?
I have thought of saying that but I wanted to make it obvious that 'this', which is referring to the fact that evidence have to be presented in a comprehensible way to the jury, lengthens court preceedings. I wasn't sure if 'lenghty duration of this' would make this link explicit so I tried 'entails'. Is there a way to better phrase the sentence to reflect this
He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails.
. . . I wanted to make it obvious that 'this', which is referring to the fact that evidence have to be presented in a comprehensible way to the jury, lengthens court proceedings. I wasn't sure if 'lenghty duration of this' would make this link explicit so I tried 'entails'. Is there a way to better phrase th