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Peaceblinkfriend Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

He has pointed out the lengthy duration (that?) this entails.

He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails. 

Do I have to put 'that' before 'entails'?

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Hi, He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails. Do I have to put 'that' before 'entails'? No.

  • Hi, He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails.
  • Do I have to put 'that' before 'entails'?
  • No.
  • It's an awkward-sounding sentence.
  • We don't normally say that something 'entails a duration'.
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Hi,

He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails.



Do I have to put 'that' before 'entails'? No.


It's an awkward-sounding sentence. We don't normally say that something 'entails a duration'.
Have you considered saying more simply He has pointed out the lengthy duration of this ?

Best wishes, Clive
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Thanks for replying Clive.

I have thought of saying that but I wanted to make it obvious that 'this', which is referring to the fact that evidence have to be presented in a comprehensible way to the jury, lengthens court preceedings. I wasn't sure if 'lenghty duration of this' would make this link explicit so I tried 'entails'. Is there a way to better phrase the sentence to reflect this
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Hi,

He has pointed out the lengthy duration this entails.

. . . I wanted to make it obvious that 'this', which is referring to the fact that evidence have to be presented in a comprehensible way to the jury, lengthens court proceedings. I wasn't sure if 'lenghty duration of this' would make this link explicit so I tried 'entails'. Is there a way to better phrase th

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