Those two sentences sound a little awkward to my ear (that doesn't mean they aren't correct). I think it would be better to just say "his English is good" or "his English is tolerable". Even if a sentence is correct grammatically it's probably best to go with the one that's most common because otherwise native speakers will think the grammar is incorrect even if they're the ones who are wrong.
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