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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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He enjoys the effects of this globalization for the variety and access
He enjoys the effects of this globalization for the variety and access they bring to his routine.
He enjoys the easy access to the variety of things that globalization bring to his routine.
Do the above two samples sound good? If not, how would you express the similar concept? Thanks.
He enjoys the easy access to the variety of things that globalization bring to his routine.
Do the above two samples sound good? If not, how would you express the similar concept? Thanks.
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Hi Angliholic My initial impression is that you might be better off writing two sentences. However, here is a possible alternative: He is enjoying the easy access to a huge variety of things which globalization has brought to his everyday routine.
- Hi Angliholic My initial impression is that you might be better off writing two sentences.
- However, here is a possible alternative: He is enjoying the easy access to a huge variety of things which globalization has brought to his everyday routine.
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Hi Angliholic
My initial impression is that you might be better off writing two sentences. However, here is a possible alternative:
He is enjoying the easy access to a huge variety of things which globalization has brought to his everyday routine.
My initial impression is that you might be better off writing two sentences. However, here is a possible alternative:
He is enjoying the easy access to a huge variety of things which globalization has brought to his everyday routine.
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Both sound a little odd. Try something like this:
He enjoys the easy access to the variety of goods and services that globalization brings to his life.
He enjoys the easy access to the variety of goods and services that globalization brings to his life.
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YankeeHi AngliholicThanks, Yankee, for your consideration.
My initial impression is that you might be better off writing two sentences. However, here is a possible alternative:
He is enjoying the easy access to a huge variety of things which globalization has brought to his everyday routine.
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Mister MicawberBoth sound a little odd. Try something like this:
He enjoys the easy access to the variety of goods and services that globalization brings to his life.
Sorry! Mister, for having missed your post.
Your version is very concise and literary.
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