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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
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He dried his sweating right in front of....
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Could you please tell me if this sentence sounds natural to your native ears, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome.
(a boy sweating heavily stood right in front of the air conditioner and developed a horribly aching body the next day)
He dried his profuse sweating right in front of the AC flaps; thus invited the aches himself.
Thanks,
Tom
Could you please tell me if this sentence sounds natural to your native ears, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome.
(a boy sweating heavily stood right in front of the air conditioner and developed a horribly aching body the next day)
He dried his profuse sweating right in front of the AC flaps; thus invited the aches himself.
Thanks,
Tom
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Hi, Could you please tell me if this sentence sounds natural to your native ears, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome. (a boy sweating heavily stood right in front of the air conditioner and developed a horribly aching body the next day) He dried his profuse sweating right in front of the AC flaps; thus invited the aches himself.
- Hi, Could you please tell me if this sentence sounds natural to your native ears, especially the yellow parts?
- Any suggestions are welcome.
- (a boy sweating heavily stood right in front of the air conditioner and developed a horribly aching body the next day) He dried his profuse sweating right in front of the AC flaps; thus invited the aches himself.
- Not a good sentence.
- Perhaps - He dried his heavy sweat right in front of the air-conditioning vents, thus inviting a lot of aches later.
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Hi,
Could you please tell me if this sentence sounds natural to your native ears, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome.
(a boy sweating heavily stood right in front of the air conditioner and developed a horribly aching body the next day)
He dried his profuse sweating right in front of the AC flaps; thus invited the aches himself.
Could you please tell me if this sentence sounds natural to your native ears, especially the yellow parts? Any suggestions are welcome.
(a boy sweating heavily stood right in front of the air conditioner and developed a horribly aching body the next day)
He dried his profuse sweating right in front of the AC flaps; thus invited the aches himself.
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