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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
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Having major trouble correcting sentences HELP PLEASE
Could you please help me correct these sentences? How would you phrases them so they sound natural?
1 The actor which the storyline revolves around in the episode besides the 2 main actors always survives.
2 There are more people who are worse off than people who are better off than us in the world.
3 My only regret is that my mom won't have been there for my wedding if she passes away.
4 For security purposes/reasons, this call is likely to be recorded/will likely be recorded.
5 If I don't want to wince, I really need to control myself as the pain is very bad.
6 How would you know what movie came out when if movies were released any day of the week and not one specific day. You would have a hard time know what movie has come out when.
7 You'll keep getting deaths if you keep building here/People will keeping dying if you keeping building houses here.
Thank you
1 The actor which the storyline revolves around in the episode besides the 2 main actors always survives.
2 There are more people who are worse off than people who are better off than us in the world.
3 My only regret is that my mom won't have been there for my wedding if she passes away.
4 For security purposes/reasons, this call is likely to be recorded/will likely be recorded.
5 If I don't want to wince, I really need to control myself as the pain is very bad.
6 How would you know what movie came out when if movies were released any day of the week and not one specific day. You would have a hard time know what movie has come out when.
7 You'll keep getting deaths if you keep building here/People will keeping dying if you keeping building houses here.
Thank you
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Could you please help me correct these sentences? How would you phrases them so they sound natural?
1 The actor which the storyline revolves around in the episode besides the 2 main actors always survives. The two principle characters and the character central to the episode always surive.
2 There are more people who are worse off than people who are better
Could you please help me correct these sentences? How would you phrases them so they sound natural?
1 The actor which the storyline revolves around in the episode besides the 2 main actors always survives. The two principle characters and the character central to the episode always surive.
2 There are more people who are worse off than people who are better
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Thank you Louise,
2 There are more people who are worse off than I than people who are better off than I.
Does that work?
3 My only regret is that my mom won't have been there for my wedding if she moves to another country.
I'm trying to find a situation where you'd use "won't have been"? Could you use that or would you use "won't be there"?
If movies
2 There are more people who are worse off than I than people who are better off than I.
Does that work?
3 My only regret is that my mom won't have been there for my wedding if she moves to another country.
I'm trying to find a situation where you'd use "won't have been"? Could you use that or would you use "won't be there"?
If movies
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