John joins Mike at the patio table and hands him a soda, having grabbed a beer for himself.
Is this sentence awkward? Would you add the last part in a separate sentence? Thank you.
anonymous Is this sentence awkward? Yes. anonymous Would you add the last part in a separate sentence?
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anonymousIs this sentence awkward?
Yes.
anonymousWould you add the last part in a separate sentence?
Yes, or as a different kind of clause, but I'd put that information before the rest. It might go something like this, but you might be able to find something better:
John grabbed a beer for himself and a so