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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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Having grabbed a beer for himself

John joins Mike at the patio table and hands him a soda, having grabbed a beer for himself.


Is this sentence awkward? Would you add the last part in a separate sentence? Thank you.

  

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anonymous Is this sentence awkward? Yes. anonymous Would you add the last part in a separate sentence?

  • anonymous Is this sentence awkward?
  • Yes.
  • anonymous Would you add the last part in a separate sentence?
  • Yes, or as a different kind of clause, but I'd put that information before the rest.
  • It might go something like this, but you might be able to find something better: John grabbed a beer for himself and a soda for Mike.
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anonymousIs this sentence awkward?

Yes.

anonymousWould you add the last part in a separate sentence?

Yes, or as a different kind of clause, but I'd put that information before the rest. It might go something like this, but you might be able to find something better:

John grabbed a beer for himself and a so

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