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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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They strongly advised that, if I were to return to University, I would do so with support available to me i.e. a learning contract detailing my mental health problems, one to one appointments with a mental health support worker, and having already applied for CBT.

is this sentence of mine OK?
  

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The third item in your list is not sufficiently like the other two.. I suggest this. e.

  • The third item in your list is not sufficiently like the other two..
  • I suggest this.
  • e.
  • a learning contract detailing my mental health problems, one to one appointments with a mental health support worker, and probably CBT, for which I have already applied.
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The third item in your list is not sufficiently like the other two..
I suggest this.

They strongly reassured me that, if I were to return to University, I would do so with support available to me i.e. a learning contract detailing my mental health problems, one to one appointme

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