Haven't found mistakes in these sentence Please help

I've tried my best to correct these, Could let me know if they are correct? The bold is my opinion?

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  I don’t want to get yelled at down the line so I want to make sure I’m doing it right. OK
  


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  What do you want to be/become when you grow up? OK
  


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  Does it matter if I’m not here Friday/if I’m here or not Friday? BOTH
  

It doesn’t matter if you’re not here Friday. OK

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  I'll give you one , only/just because it’s you. don't know
  


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  He's not one to say no to a free meal. OK
  


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  The letter that make up the code are conveniently close on the keyboard. OK
  


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  How did you come to work in this part of the company. OK
  


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  I’m furthest/farthest from the door. farthest
  


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  Place it in the same order as that/in the same order that it was in. AS or THAT BOTH
  


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  Your turn will come/It’ll be your turn one day. BOTH First is better
  


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  I'm going make you listen to a song, listen!!! OK
  

Thank you