HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHY...?

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Can you guys pls correct my essay 's grammar, words, or whatever u feel not correct. Thanks a lot.

HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHY...

Have you ever wondered why there are rich people - poor people, good looking people - ugly people, happy people - unhappy people exist in the same world ? Why everyone has his own destiny? Some person would say that God gave us our denities. But I think God always hope us to have happy lives; just because he's a God whom we pray whenever we have troubles. Sometimes, I accidently see a child who has inborn handicap, I can't stop wondering why such an innocent baby must endure this happiness, there is no reason for anyone bring this happiness to the baby. Also, many kind hearted persons must live in poor condition, but some persons give themselves the deciding others' lives right live in a plenty of material condition. That is not fair. It means we were born to suffer unfair lives? If that we won't thanks for our being born, right?

I have wondered these things for a long time but little by little i found out the truth.

At one day, i heard about reincarnation on Discovery channel. The boy ( bout 6 years old) who was interviewed talked about his past life. The boy told that in his past life he was an American Airforce pilot and he was dead in an airplane explosion. In current life, although he was still a little kid but he knew almost every plane in the Airforce which his parents had never heard. This means maybe all of us have our past lives and it likes Buddhist theory. I collected information talk about reincarnation in Buddhism. And i found a very important thing: Karma.

According to Buddhist theory, we must live from this life to another life by being born and dead and turn around, that is called metempsychosis. Of couse , the past life woldnt like the present life. Even, in the past life a person (of the current life) may be a dog and opposite. If in the past life, you were a good person, you love other people, you help them money, food now in this present life, we'll have a happy foundation( ex: now you were born in wealthy family, you are nice looking, you have good job, your friends like you). Opposite, in the past life you stole somebody 's money, food, lover.. or u beat somebody and made him injuried now you maybe a poor person or a handicapper. That's Karma. But Karma is not such simple, it's more complex and harder to understand because we cant see it. Above I just said some simplest expamles. Maybe it's hard for all people to believe but if you observe the around things, you 'll know KARMA is the rule of the universe. For example, we planted a tree, now we have a tree; we see a house and we know that somebody built it in the past, we want to be a knowledgeable person, we must study hard...

The Karma says that we decide our current life and the future life, so in our current life we should be friendly with everybody, must live honestly, love everyone esp our family. For me, metempsychosis and karma satisfy my wonder,and make me feel that the life is not unfair, just because we cant see how things go. How about you, do u have any wonder ?Maybe you have many wonder about what i said, so why dont you research and find out the truth. I just want to say that in this 21st century we have condition to know what is right and what is wrong, anyway, i hope everyone will live by kind heart for a peace world, for the present life and for the next life.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I have made some suggestions in the first paragraphs of your essay.

lin-neCan you guys please correct my essay's grammar, words, or whatever you feel is not correct. Thanks a lot.

HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHY...

Have you ever wondered why there are rich people, poor people, good-looking people, ugly people, happy people, and unhappy people existing (coexisting would be a good word here) in the same world? Why everyone has his own destiny? Some people would say that *** gave us our destinies. But I think *** would always hope for us to have happy lives; just because he's a *** to whom we pray whenever we have troubles. Sometimes, I ~~accidentally~~ see a child who has been born with a handicap, I can't stop wondering why such an innocent baby must endure this unhappiness; there is no reason for anyone to bring this unhappiness to the baby. Also, many kind-hearted people must live in poor conditions (conditions of poverty), but some people give themselves the deciding others' lives right live in a plenty of material condition. (This yellow sentence does not make sense). That is not fair. Does it mean that we were born to suffer unfair lives? If that is true, we wouldn't give thanks for ~~our~~ being born, right?

I have wondered about these things for a long time but little by little i found out the truth.

At One day, i heard about reincarnation on Discovery channel. The boy ( about 6 years old) who was interviewed talked about his past life. The boy told that in his past life he was an American Air Force pilot and he was dead in an airplane explosion. In his current life, although he was still a little kid, ~~but~~ he knew almost every plane in the Air Force, even those which his parents had never heard about. This means that maybe all of us have ~~our~~ past lives. This is ~~and it likes~~ a belief of Buddhism.~~theory~~. I collected information ~~talk~~ about reincarnation in Buddhism. And i found a very important idea: Karma.

According to Buddhist theory, we must live from this life to another life by being born and dying. That turn around~~, that~~ is called metempsychosis. (actually, the better term is transmigration, since metempsychosis refers to the Greek belief in the same concept) Of course, one's past life wouldn't be like one's present life. ~~Even, i~~In his past life a person (of the current life) may have been a dog or vice versa - he may be a dog now and a human being before. ~~and opposite~~. If in the past life, you were a good person - you loved other people, you helped them money or food - then in this present life, you will ~~we'll~~ have a happy foundation ( ex: now you were born in a wealthy family, you are nice-looking, you have a good job, your friends like you). On the other hand, ~~pposite,~~ if in your past life you stole somebody's money, food, lover, or you beat somebody and ~~made him~~ injured him, then now you might be a poor ~~person~~ or a handicapped (A handicapper is someone who works in the field of gambling, deciding what team might win, and by how much). That's Karma. But Karma is not so simple, it's more complex and harder to understand because we can't see it. Above I just said some of the simplest examples.. Maybe it's hard for all people to believe but if you observe the ~~around~~ things around you, you 'll know that KARMA is the rule of the universe. For example, we planted a tree, now we have a tree; we see a house and we know that somebody built it in the past, and if we want to be a knowledgeable people, we must study hard...

Lin-ne · Answer

thanks a lot. i appreciate ur suggestion

Maxter50 · Answer

Well I am not an expert, but well see how you like this.

Have you ever wondered why...?

Have you ever wondered why there are a variety of people: rich people, poor people, beautiful; ugly people, happy and sad people, all existing in the same world? Have you ever wondered why everyone has their own desitny? Some people say that a *** gave us our destinies, but I think that a *** would always hope for us to have happy lives; this is because it is a *** to whom we pray to whenever trouble befalls us.

Sometimes when I see a child who has been born with a handicap, I cant stop wondering why such an innocent baby must endure this unhappiness when there is no reason for anyone to bring this unhappiness to the baby. Many kind people must live in poor conditions (i.e conditions of poverty), while others live in wealth and have all the material possesions that they could desire. It doesnt seem fair, does this mean that we were born to suffer unfair lives? If that is true, then we might not give thanks to our being born. I have been wondering about these things for quite some time; little by little I have found the truth.

One day I heard about reincarnation on the Discovery Channel. There was a boy, about six years old, who was interviewd about his past life. The boy saidthat in his past life he was an American Air Force pilot and he was killed in an airplane explosion. Now, in his current life, although he is only a child, he knew about almost every plane in the Air Force; he even knew about planes which his parents did not have any knoweldge of. Maybe this means that all of us have past lives.

The belief that we have past lives is a large part of the a Buddhist theory, the idea of Karma. According to the idea of Karma, we must live this life to another life by being born and dying. That process of turning around is called metempsychosis (actually, the better term is transmigration because metempsychosis refers to the Greek belief of similar concepts.) Of course, one's past life would not be the same as one's present life.

In one's past life they may have been a dog or vice versa, they might be a dog now after being a human in their past life. If you were a good person you'r past life; you did kind acts such as helping other people, then you will be born with a happy foundation (i.e. you might have a happy, wealthy family or have other benifits by your position of birth.) However, if you were bad person, doing bad thins such as stealing or gambling, then your station in life will change and your foundation will be poor (i.e. you might be hindicapped, poor or mistreated.) Thats the basic idea of Karma, but Karma is much more complex than it seems because we cant see it.

Above I just explained some of the simplest examples of Karma. It can be hard for all people to believe Karma exists but if you observe the things around you, you might learn the Karma is indeed the rule of the universe. For example, if you plant a tree, you will have a tree; if you see a house, you know that someone built it in the past and if we want to be knowledgeable, we must study hard...

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