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Sun 94 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Have no friendship..

Can I have your commnets for the following sentences?

My roomates uses my stuff without my permission even though we have got no friendship. Last week, I had to call campus security and check the CCTV's record because my stuff was gone in my room.
  

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I would have worded it: "My roomates use my things without my permission, what's more is that we are not friends. "

  • I would have worded it: "My roomates use my things without my permission, what's more is that we are not friends.
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I would have worded it:

"My roomates use my things without my permission, what's more is that we are not friends. Last week, I had to call campus security to check the CCTV because my things had dissapeared from my room."

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