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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Have I redundantly used 'her father' in this sentence? If I have, how can I make the sentence sound better?
Have I redundantly used 'her father' in this sentence? If I have, how can I make the sentence sound better?
When Nina fixed her father’s bow tie and smoothed out his collar, her father smiled.
When Nina fixed her father’s bow tie and smoothed out his collar, her father smiled.
Top answer
Just use 'he'.
- Just use 'he'.
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