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Rommel Posted 8 years ago
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Have I correctly used ‘within’ in the sentence?

Have I correctly used ‘within’ in the sentence?

Thomas says she can see the golden heart of Mother Teresa of India within his mother Teresa.

  

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Rommel Thomas says she can see the golden heart of Mother Teresa of India within his mother Teresa. To me, this sounds a little too descriptive. You can consider this: Thomas says she sees the heart of Mother Teresa (India) in his mother, Teresa.

  • Rommel Thomas says she can see the golden heart of Mother Teresa of India within his mother Teresa.
  • To me, this sounds a little too descriptive.
  • You can consider this: Thomas says she sees the heart of Mother Teresa (India) in his mother, Teresa.
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RommelThomas says she can see the golden heart of Mother Teresa of India within his mother Teresa.

To me, this sounds a little too descriptive.

You can consider this:

Thomas says she sees the heart of Mother Teresa (India) in his mother, Teresa.

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