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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Have I correctly used 'these' and 'suggestions for improvement' in the sentence?
Have I correctly used 'these' and 'suggestions for improvement' in the sentence?
Sir Marley had to critique their literary works, but if these were not good enough, he would not hesitate to offer suggestions for improvement.
Sir Marley had to critique their literary works, but if these were not good enough, he would not hesitate to offer suggestions for improvement.
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I would use "they" instead of "these," and I don't find the use of "but" to be logical.
- I would use "they" instead of "these," and I don't find the use of "but" to be logical.
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I would use "they" instead of "these," and I don't find the use of "but" to be logical.
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