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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Have I correctly used the conjunction 'after' in this sentence?

Have I correctly used the conjunction 'after' in this sentence?

After younger students had defeated her team and after she had been compared to her younger sister Letty, Lulu remained calm.
  

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Yes. You could omit the second 'that' if you want to think of it all as related parts of a single event. You might consider saying '.

— Clive

  • Yes.
  • You could omit the second 'that' if you want to think of it all as related parts of a single event.
  • You might consider saying '.
  • .
  • unfavourably compared .
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Yes.

You could omit the second 'that' if you want to think of it all as related parts of a single event.

You might consider saying '. .. . unfavourably compared . . . '.

Clive
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