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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Have I correctly used ‘tears pooling out’ and ‘beaming smile’ in this sentence?
Have I correctly used ‘tears pooling out’ and ‘beaming smile’ in this sentence?
With her arms wrapped around her father’s arm, Sandy walked down the aisle while holding a bouquet of red roses, with tears pooling out in her eyes, but still with a beaming smile.
With her arms wrapped around her father’s arm, Sandy walked down the aisle while holding a bouquet of red roses, with tears pooling out in her eyes, but still with a beaming smile.
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Sandy walked down the aisle while holding a bouquet of red roses, with tears pooling out in her eyes, and but still with a beaming smile on her lips .
- Sandy walked down the aisle while holding a bouquet of red roses, with tears pooling out in her eyes, and but still with a beaming smile on her lips .
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Sandy walked down the aisle while holding a bouquet of red roses, with tears pooling out in her eyes, and but still with a beaming smile on her lips.
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AlpheccaStars ...in her eyes, and...AlpheccaStars, should there really be a comma between 'eyes' and 'and'? It should be omitted, shouldn't it?
...with tears pooling in her eyes and a beaming smile on her lips.
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