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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Have I correctly used 'pursuing,' enhance,' and 'well-being' in this sentence?
Have I correctly used 'pursuing,' enhance,' and 'well-being' in this sentence?
Joe and Jane, who are a teenage couple, must not only learn to moderate their feelings of attachment but also try to divert their attention from each other by pursuing hobbies and interests which can enhance their well-being and productivity.
Joe and Jane, who are a teenage couple, must not only learn to moderate their feelings of attachment but also try to divert their attention from each other by pursuing hobbies and interests which can enhance their well-being and productivity.
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"Productivity" doesn't fit the above context. Also, that sentence needn't be so long.
- "Productivity" doesn't fit the above context.
- Also, that sentence needn't be so long.
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"Productivity" doesn't fit the above context. Also, that sentence needn't be so long.
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How can I make the sentence more comprehensible then? What if I replace 'productivity' with 'well-being'?
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Joe and Jane, who are a teenage couple, must not only learn to moderate their feelings of attachment to each other, but also pursue their own individual hobbies and interests.
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