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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Have I correctly used 'maze,' 'intensifying,' and 'including'?

Have I correctly used 'maze,' 'intensifying,' and 'including'?

My best friend Emmanuel, who is now a teenager, has found himself stuck in a maze of physical changes and intensifying emotions, including romantic attractions and wanting to be in a relationship.
  

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OK.

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Would it be acceptable if I replaced wanting with the desire?

...and the desire to be in a relationship.

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