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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
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Have I correctly used ‘loud enough’ and ‘her’ in this sentence?
Have I correctly used ‘loud enough’ and ‘her’ in this sentence?
I don’t know any other word to use than ‘loud enough,’ which seems to contradict ‘in a soft voice.’ Meanwhile, the pronoun ‘her’ is also ambiguous because it seems to refer to either Janine or Danica. Please help me correct this sentence.
Janine talked in a soft voice, yet it was loud enough to snap Danica out of her train of thoughts.
I don’t know any other word to use than ‘loud enough,’ which seems to contradict ‘in a soft voice.’ Meanwhile, the pronoun ‘her’ is also ambiguous because it seems to refer to either Janine or Danica. Please help me correct this sentence.
Janine talked in a soft voice, yet it was loud enough to snap Danica out of her train of thoughts.
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The sentence looks fine to me. Loud enough is correctly used, and her would normally be assumed to refer to Danica.
- The sentence looks fine to me.
- Loud enough is correctly used, and her would normally be assumed to refer to Danica.
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The sentence looks fine to me. Loud enough is correctly used, and her would normally be assumed to refer to Danica.
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...should I say 'train of thoughts' (plural) or 'train of thought' (singular)?
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