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Rommel Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Have I correctly used ‘jamming’ and ‘doing’ in the sentence?

Have I correctly used ‘jamming’ and ‘doing’ in the sentence?

Every night, they roam wherever they want, jamming together, doing many other things they want to do.

  

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Rommel Every night, they roam wherever they want, jamming together, doing many other things they want to do. The participles are OK, but the vocabulary usage does not quite fit and you are missing a conjunction. Every night they roam wherever they want, running amuck, breaking car windows, disturbing the neighbors and doing many other things they want to do.

  • Rommel Every night, they roam wherever they want, jamming together, doing many other things they want to do.
  • The participles are OK, but the vocabulary usage does not quite fit and you are missing a conjunction.
  • Every night they roam wherever they want, running amuck, breaking car windows, disturbing the neighbors and doing many other things they want to do.
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RommelEvery night, they roam wherever they want, jamming together, doing many other things they want to do.

The participles are OK, but the vocabulary usage does not quite fit and you are missing a conjunction.

Every night they roam wherever they want, running amuck, breaking car windows, disturbing the neighbors and doing many other things they want

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