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Rommel Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Have I correctly used ‘instead,’ ‘so as to,’ ‘their,’ and ‘ones’ in the given sentences?

Have I correctly used ‘instead,’ ‘so as to,’ ‘their,’ and ‘ones’ in the given sentences?

  1. In her article, the news reporter withheld the victims’ real names and used fictitious names instead so as to protect their
  2. The victims’ real names were changed into fictitious ones so as to protect their privacy.
  

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). Fine, but it seems you left out the last word. Rommel The victims’ real names were changed into fictitious ones so as to protect their privacy.

  • ).
  • Fine, but it seems you left out the last word.
  • Rommel The victims’ real names were changed into fictitious ones so as to protect their privacy.
  • Fine.
  • (I'd use 'changed to' instead of 'changed into'.
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RommelIn her article, the news reporter withheld the victims’ real names and used fictitious names instead so as to protect their (privacy?).

Fine, but it seems you left out the last word.

RommelThe victims’ real names were changed into fictitious ones so as to protect their privacy.

Fine. (I'd use 'changed to' in

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