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Rommel Posted 9 years ago
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Have I correctly used 'in such a way' in the sentence? If not, how can I make it acceptable?

Have I correctly used 'in such a way' in the sentence? If not, how can I make it acceptable? Thank you.

Charlotte has advised her cousin Ben to customize the setting of his social media account in such a way that unknown users will not be able to access essential information about him.

  

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Rommel Charlotte has advised her cousin Ben to customize the setting of his social media account in such a way so that unknown users couldn't access the essential information about him.

  • Rommel Charlotte has advised her cousin Ben to customize the setting of his social media account in such a way so that unknown users couldn't access the essential information about him.
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RommelCharlotte has advised her cousin Ben to customize the setting of his social media account in such a way so that unknown users couldn't access the essential information about him.
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I would use "settings" in the above, and "anonymous" instead of "unknown". Otherwise, it's okay.

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