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Rommel Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Have I correctly used ‘crashing her body on me’ and ‘squeezing me tight in a warm embrace’ in the sentence?

Have I correctly used ‘crashing her body on me’ and ‘squeezing me tight in a warm embrace’ in the sentence?

“Honey,” my girlfriend squealed, crashing her body on me, squeezing me tight in a warm embrace. “I’ve been missing you.”
  

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Crashing her body on me is grammatically correct, but not very natural. Squeezing me tight in a warm embrace is fine.

  • Crashing her body on me is grammatically correct, but not very natural.
  • Squeezing me tight in a warm embrace is fine.
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Crashing her body on me is grammatically correct, but not very natural.
Squeezing me tight in a warm embrace is fine.

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