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Rommel Posted 8 years ago
Grammar
Have I correctly used 'choreographed' in the sentence?
Have I correctly used 'choreographed' in the first sentence?
The program started with a doxology choreographed by university students.
Should I say the following instead?
The program started with a doxology accompanied by a choreography by university students.
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If you mean there was a dance set to music, the second one is better. The dance itself could be the doxology even without music, and the first one suggests that.
- If you mean there was a dance set to music, the second one is better.
- The dance itself could be the doxology even without music, and the first one suggests that.
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If you mean there was a dance set to music, the second one is better. The dance itself could be the doxology even without music, and the first one suggests that.
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