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Rommel Posted 8 years ago
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Have I correctly used ‘attend,’ ‘necessities,’ and ‘upon the resumption’ in my sentence?

Have I correctly used ‘attend,’ ‘necessities,’ and ‘upon the resumption’ in my sentence?


I attended my girlfriend’s graduation ceremonies. The master of ceremonies said that the audience had a 15-minute break to attend to their personal needs or necessities. Upon the resumption of the ceremonies, the liberal arts dean presented the graduates to the university president.

  

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I attended my girlfriend’s graduation ceremonies. After two hours, t he master of ceremonies said that the audience had there would be a a 15-minute break to attend to their personal needs or necessities . Upon the resumption of the ceremonies, the liberal arts dean presented the graduates to the university president.

  • I attended my girlfriend’s graduation ceremonies.
  • After two hours, t he master of ceremonies said that the audience had there would be a a 15-minute break to attend to their personal needs or necessities .
  • Upon the resumption of the ceremonies, the liberal arts dean presented the graduates to the university president.
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I attended my girlfriend’s graduation ceremonies. After two hours, the master of ceremonies said that the audience had there would be a a 15-minute break to attend to their personal needs or necessities. Upon the resumption of the ceremonies, the liberal arts dean presented the graduates to the university president.

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