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Sowmiii Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Have I constructed a correct sentence?

Hello friends,
Kindly tell me whether I'm making a correct sentence in the above:

I had been relieved from the organisation on account of personal reasons and took a break to take care of my grandmother from her sickness...
  

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Not quite. eg I had been relieved from the organization for on account of personal reasons so I took a break to take care of my sick grandmother from her sickness . 'relieved' makes it sound like you were in the army.

— Clive

  • Not quite.
  • eg I had been relieved from the organization for on account of personal reasons so I took a break to take care of my sick grandmother from her sickness .
  • 'relieved' makes it sound like you were in the army.
  • Do you mean 'fired' or 'dismissed'?
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Not quite.
eg I had been relieved from the organization for on account of personal reasons so I took a break to take care of my sick grandmother from her sickness.

'relieved' makes it sound like you were in the army. Do you mean 'fired' or 'dismissed'?
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No I had left the organisation
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sowmiiiQuoteNo I had left the organisation
There is no call for past perfect in your posting.

I resigned from the organisation for a personal reason: to take care of my sick grandmother.
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