We checked the hydraulic massage chair and have found that the unit is in working order as per the operation manuals provided. We have explained the operating procedure to the person concerned and demonstration of the equipment has taken place in his presence.
We checked the hydraulic massage chair and the unit is found to be in working order as per the operation manuals provided. We have explained the operating procedure to the person concerned and demonstration of the equipment has taken place in his presence.
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Active Voice is better. We have checked the hydraulic massage chair and found that the unit is in working order as per the operation manuals provided. We have explained the operating procedure to the person concerned and demonstrated the equipment to him
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Active Voice is better.
We have checked the hydraulic massage chair and found that the unit is in working order as per the operation manuals provided. We have explained the operating procedure to the person concerned and demonstrated the equipment to him