Hiya Roberta, To me, your essay sounds like a 5 sentences single paragraph text. And I would agree with the adopted presentation : no 'carriage returns' between the sentences. I'm not a native speaker but I would think the rules are more or less the same as in my mother tongue : you would start a new paragraph whenever you feel whatever you're going to say next is loosely connected or no longer connected to the previous sentence.
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