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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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hauled

The was a far different Malvo from the defiant kid police hauled in four years ago.

Is there anything wrong on the above sentence ?

Can I say ?

This was a far different Malvo from the defiant kid who police hauled him in four years ago.

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The original sentence is fine. The modified sentence only works without him : This was a far different Malvo from the defiant kid who police hauled in four years ago.

  • The original sentence is fine.
  • The modified sentence only works without him : This was a far different Malvo from the defiant kid who police hauled in four years ago.
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The original sentence is fine.

The modified sentence only works without him:

This was a far different Malvo from the defiant kid who police hauled in four years ago.

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