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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
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Has it been expressed professionally?
Japan Tourism Automobile and Cruise Association also held an exhibition to introduce and promote new products of tourism automobile. Not only has it offered the tourism automobile manufacturers a smart opportunity to show and promote their new products, but also did it offer a communication platform for the enterprises of travelling-by-automobile service and the manufacturers of tourism automobile.
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Here's a running commentary for you. Hope it helps.
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So far, so good, except I don't know what you mean by "Tourism Automobile".
Now it goes a bit pear-shaped:
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So far, so good, except I don't know what you mean by "Tourism Automobile".
Now it goes a bit pear-shaped:
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Now you're back on track (Good use of inversion aft
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I'm also puzzled by 'tourism automobile'.
Firstly, 'automobile' is an obsolete word in British english, I do not know if it is used in american. 'Car' is invariably the British word of choice for this.
Do you mean perhaps
'hire car' - vehicles hired by tourists to self-drive during their stay
'tour bus' 'coach' 'minibus' - larger vehicles that would be used
Firstly, 'automobile' is an obsolete word in British english, I do not know if it is used in american. 'Car' is invariably the British word of choice for this.
Do you mean perhaps
'hire car' - vehicles hired by tourists to self-drive during their stay
'tour bus' 'coach' 'minibus' - larger vehicles that would be used
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(1)Tourism automobile = travelling vehicle = tour bus
Could not you find out the definition "automobile = vehicle" in your dictionaries?
(2) communication platform = the exhibition served as "a venue for the exchange of ideas/information"
PS. (From American Heritage Dictionary)
Automobile: A self-propelled passenger vehicle that usually
Could not you find out the definition "automobile = vehicle" in your dictionaries?
(2) communication platform = the exhibition served as "a venue for the exchange of ideas/information"
PS. (From American Heritage Dictionary)
Automobile: A self-propelled passenger vehicle that usually
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Hi Jobb,
Let me present one possible re-write:
"Japan Tourism Automobile and Travel Association also held an exhibition to introduce and promote new products for automobile tourism. Not only has this exhibition offered these manufacturers a fine opportunity to present their products, but it has also served as an advertising venue for auto travel services and bus and recreatio
Let me present one possible re-write:
"Japan Tourism Automobile and Travel Association also held an exhibition to introduce and promote new products for automobile tourism. Not only has this exhibition offered these manufacturers a fine opportunity to present their products, but it has also served as an advertising venue for auto travel services and bus and recreatio
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Hi me again,
Yes of course I know what automobile means. The problem is that we were all connecting to the word 'Tourism' as though tourism automobile were a type of vehicle, and that sounded really odd to a native speaker.
I still think that Vehicle is a better word if you want to cover various types of transport, automobile sounds like something from the 1920's to me.
Yes of course I know what automobile means. The problem is that we were all connecting to the word 'Tourism' as though tourism automobile were a type of vehicle, and that sounded really odd to a native speaker.
I still think that Vehicle is a better word if you want to cover various types of transport, automobile sounds like something from the 1920's to me.
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