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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
Has it been expressed clearly?
In addition, I hope you can improve the expression below and make it sounds mouthwatering.
LEE Beef is one of the traditional dainties made by LEE Beef-processing Packinghouse. Featured by its good look, sweet-smelling and fine taste, the dry beef has won silver prize of quality products of Texas Industrial Association. The beef, dry but not hard, smooth but not soft, black outside while red inside, is like the character of Zhangfei, a noted hero of Chinese classic work -- Three Kingdom, so it is also called Zhangfei Beef.
LEE Beef is one of the traditional dainties made by LEE Beef-processing Packinghouse. Featured by its good look, sweet-smelling and fine taste, the dry beef has won silver prize of quality products of Texas Industrial Association. The beef, dry but not hard, smooth but not soft, black outside while red inside, is like the character of Zhangfei, a noted hero of Chinese classic work -- Three Kingdom, so it is also called Zhangfei Beef.
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It has been cruelly jilted.
- It has been cruelly jilted.
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Oh all right then! Native British version (and written by someone in marketing you lucky thing...I don't normally do freebies...
LEE Beef is one of the traditional delicacies (not dainties) from (China?) now available in (?). This sweet-smelling, succulent dried beef won the Texan silver prize of quality in (year?).
It is also known as Zhangfei Beef as it reminds the makers of
LEE Beef is one of the traditional delicacies (not dainties) from (China?) now available in (?). This sweet-smelling, succulent dried beef won the Texan silver prize of quality in (year?).
It is also known as Zhangfei Beef as it reminds the makers of
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Oh all right then! Native British version (and written by someone in marketing you lucky thing...I don't normally do freebies...
LEE Beef is one of the traditional delicacies (not dainties) from (China?) now available in (?). This sweet-smelling, succulent dried beef won the Texan silver prize of quality in (year?).
It is also known as Zhangfei Beef as it reminds the makers of
LEE Beef is one of the traditional delicacies (not dainties) from (China?) now available in (?). This sweet-smelling, succulent dried beef won the Texan silver prize of quality in (year?).
It is also known as Zhangfei Beef as it reminds the makers of
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