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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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how hard the story five kids reigns age from three to forteen wednas their father killed the mother and shot himself
so imagine same size family from yazidi minority has been captured by islamic state in iraq August 3rd 2014 the isis members rape the mother in front of her children and husband
then rape the forteen years old daughter in fron of all family member killed the father then took the three years old child to trining camp to trine him to becom terrorist
how mercy is this religion welcome to the right way
happy ramdan to all my good muslims friends

  

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Your paragraph has many errors. Every sentence must begin with a capital letter. Every sentence must end with a punctuation mark.

  • Your paragraph has many errors.
  • Every sentence must begin with a capital letter.
  • Every sentence must end with a punctuation mark.
  • I will first highlight the spelling or mistakes in a word.
  • If you fix these, then we can work on the grammar and sentence errors.
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Your paragraph has many errors.
Every sentence must begin with a capital letter.
Every sentence must end with a punctuation mark.

I will first highlight the spelling or mistakes in a word. If you fix these, then we can work on the grammar and sentence errors.

There are many of these problems too.


how hard the story five kids

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