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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Happy with young friends.

“That’s mine!” shouted Rachel. She grabbed the doll from Megan’s hand. “Oh, Rachel, that’s not very nice. You need to share your toys with other children. They share their toys with you,” Megan’s mum said. But Rachel refused to share. “Come one, Megan. I think we need to go hom. Rachel’s not sharing her toys,” her mum said. Soon they left. Rachel sat on her toys for a while and then dropped the doll. Her mum was busy in the kitchen and now she had nobody to play with. Rachel spent the whole day playing in her room by herself. She built a castle with the blocks, but there was nobody to see how tall it was. Soon she started to feel lonely. She wished that she had shared her toys with Megan and that Megan were still here. She knocked at Megan’s door. “I’m sorry, Megan. If you come back and play with me, I’ll share my toys with you,” Rachel said. Megan smiled. “Okay, as long as you share, I will bring some of my toys over and you can play with them too.” She ran into her room and took her favourite toys over to Rachel’s. They played together happily for severa hours. When it was time for Megan to go hom, she said, “I’m happy. I have fun in sharing.” Rachel smiled. She was happier because she’d shared her toys and let Megan play with whatever she wanted.
  

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