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Liton Das Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Happy moment

what else would a happy moment be than seeing kids are happy and enjoying the moment.


Is that correct please correct this?

  

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I can understand what you want to say , but I don't think it's correct as it is, I think it needs modifying. Honestly, I also struggled to make it in a way that makes me feel I could express the actual meaning you wanted. I'm not sure of my sentences structure either, these are just trying: ?

  • I can understand what you want to say , but I don't think it's correct as it is, I think it needs modifying.
  • Honestly, I also struggled to make it in a way that makes me feel I could express the actual meaning you wanted.
  • I'm not sure of my sentences structure either, these are just trying: ?
  • -What else would it be more happy other than seeing kids' happiness.
  • -What would be happier than seeing happy kids enjoying their moment.
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I can understand what you want to say , but I don't think it's correct as it is, I think it needs modifying. Honestly, I also struggled to make it in a way that makes me feel I could express the actual meaning you wanted. I'm not sure of my sentences structure either, these are just trying: ?


-What else would it be more happy other than seeing kids' happiness.

-What would be h

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Liton DasIs that correct

No.

Liton Dasplease correct this?

I tried, but I deleted it because I don't know what you mean.

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