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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

On the second day, we spent a whole day at Kata beach, which is an excellent spot for little-surfers thanks to its shallow waters and gentle waters. I got my first surfing lesson here. More often than not, we were still on the beach after the sun went down. In the evening, we lit a couple of paper lanterns and made a wish as they floated up into the night sky.
  

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contiluo On the second day, we spent a whole day Two 'day's in the first sentence! You seem to have learned nothing from my last post.

— Mister Micawber

  • contiluo On the second day, we spent a whole day Two 'day's in the first sentence!
  • You seem to have learned nothing from my last post.
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contiluoOn the second day, we spent a whole day
Two 'day's in the first sentence! You seem to have learned nothing from my last post.
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On the second day, we spent at Kata beach, which is an excellent spot for little-surfers thanks to its shallow waters and gentle waters. I got my first surfing lesson here. More often than not, we were still on the beach after the sun went down. In the evening, we lit a couple of paper lanterns and made a wish as they floated up into the night sky.
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On the second day, We spent the second day at Kata beach, which is an excellent spot for little- novice (inexperienced) surfers thanks to its shallow waters and gentle waters. I got my first surfing lesson here. More often than not, we were still on the beach after the sun went down (You just said you spent the second day there. Now you indi
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We spent the second day at Kata beach, which is an excellent spot for novice surfers thanks to its shallow and gentle waters. I got my first surfing lesson here. Besides, I took the parasailing ride with my friends. After the sun went down, we were still roaming on the beach. In the evening, we lit a couple of paper lanterns and made a wish as they floated up into the night sky.
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We spent the second day at Kata Beach, which is an excellent spot for novice surfers, thanks to its shallow and gentle waters. I got my first surfing lesson here, and I took a parasailing ride with my friends. After the sun went down, we were still roaming the beach. In the evening, we lit a couple of paper lanterns and made a wish as they floated up into the
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