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Odessa Dawn Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Happy Marriage

Happy Marriage

Our congratulations on finding each other!

Hi, recipient's name;

We wish to convey our sincere and heartiest wishes to a happy, joyful marriage, and showers of love. We wish you unbounded love, and you cherish each other forever.

Togetherness forever,

Is it correctly punctuated? Is there any improvement needed, please?
  

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It contains too many redundancies and needs paring to something like this: Happy Marriage! Dear [name], Our congratulations on your finding each other! We offer you our sincere and heartiest wishes for a joyful marriage..

— Mister Micawber

  • It contains too many redundancies and needs paring to something like this: Happy Marriage!
  • Dear [name], Our congratulations on your finding each other!
  • We offer you our sincere and heartiest wishes for a joyful marriage..
  • We wish you unbounded love, and we hope that you cherish each other forever.
  • Sincerely yours,
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It contains too many redundancies and needs paring to something like this:

Happy Marriage!

Dear [name],

Our congratulations on your finding each other! We offer you our sincere and heartiest wishes for a joyful marriage.. We wish you unbounded love, and we hope that you cherish each other forever.

Sincerely yours,
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