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Longxray Posted 19 years ago

Happy Forever

1font00Turn on the switch and light the fire,02br
00Everything will be solved including your hope and desire.02br
00Dream for now and dream for the future,02br
00You are your master and you are your tutor.02br
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00Go on moving and walk around,02br
00The key point that you need is everything in your surround.02br
00Climb up the mountain and jump off the tree,02br
00Come out from the dark prison and be free.02br
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00Always be fresh and always be wise,02br
00There won't be pain and no disguise.02br
00Catch the hand each other and come on together02br
00You will be healthy, wealthy and happy forever.02font02br
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01font00This is my poem in English. I'm very poor in vocabulary and grammer so I need to work hard to study English. It would better if you correct my mistakes.02font02br
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01font00Sincerely yours02font02br
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01font00Chet02font0-
  

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— Julielai

  • )12br 10Everything will be solved including your hope and desire.
  • )12b 10 around,12br 11b 10The key point that (Not v.
  • 12font 12br 12br 11font 10This is my poem in English.
  • I'm very poor in vocabulary and grammer so I need to work hard to study English.
  • 12font 12br 12br 11font 10Sincerely yours12font 12br 12br 11font 10Chet12font 12br 12br 12blockquote 10 0-
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01cite10Longxray12cite10My two cents:12br
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11font10Turn on the switch and light the fire, (if you have a light switch why need a fire?)12br
10Everything will be solved including your hope and desire. (your hope and desire will be solved?)12br
10Dream for now and dr
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