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Tizry Syahnon Posted 20 years ago
Hi, below is the short story about my son's 1st birthday celebration as written in my blog.
A year passed by and the first birthday celebration for the new-comer; a simple gathering, celebrated with atok (grandfather), nenek (grandmother), auntie, mama and abah (father). You didn’t even know how to blow the candle yet when we finished singing you your birthday song. However, your eyes indeed had told us your recognition towards the celebration which was dedicated for you. The presents really tickled your enthusiasm of impatience. Yet, it was another excitement created from your whole new world of wonders and curiosities. You hold, you grabbed, you pulled, you seized, and those entire stuffs eventually ended up wet inside your mouth. On the other days, you climbed, you stumbled, you laughed and you cried as well, as you were the earnest of an infant could be.
Amidst of your growth and development, they, mama especially, would always scream every time when she noticed you were doing your unsafe stunt acts again and again.
They all compassionately care and love you profoundly.
Happy 1st birthday to you!
Well, I myself do not know whether my English is good or besides, but at all times, I believe it can be improved. I really appreciate those sifus outside who can possibly makes the story better, at least in the sense of grammar.
Thank you in advance!
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Happy Birthday To You! (Grammar Checking!)
Hi, below is the short story about my son's 1st birthday celebration as written in my blog.
A year passed by and the first birthday celebration for the new-comer; a simple gathering, celebrated with atok (grandfather), nenek (grandmother), auntie, mama and abah (father). You didn’t even know how to blow the candle yet when we finished singing you your birthday song. However, your eyes indeed had told us your recognition towards the celebration which was dedicated for you. The presents really tickled your enthusiasm of impatience. Yet, it was another excitement created from your whole new world of wonders and curiosities. You hold, you grabbed, you pulled, you seized, and those entire stuffs eventually ended up wet inside your mouth. On the other days, you climbed, you stumbled, you laughed and you cried as well, as you were the earnest of an infant could be.
Amidst of your growth and development, they, mama especially, would always scream every time when she noticed you were doing your unsafe stunt acts again and again.
They all compassionately care and love you profoundly.
Happy 1st birthday to you!
Well, I myself do not know whether my English is good or besides, but at all times, I believe it can be improved. I really appreciate those sifus outside who can possibly makes the story better, at least in the sense of grammar.
Thank you in advance!
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A year passed by and along came the first birthday celebration for the new-comer; a simple gathering, celebrated with atok (grandfather), nenek (grandmother), auntie, mama and abah (father). You didn’t even know how to blow out the candle when we finished singing you your birthday song. However, your eyes indeed told us that you understood that the celebration was dedicated to you .
- A year passed by and along came the first birthday celebration for the new-comer; a simple gathering, celebrated with atok (grandfather), nenek (grandmother), auntie, mama and abah (father).
- You didn’t even know how to blow out the candle when we finished singing you your birthday song.
- However, your eyes indeed told us that you understood that the celebration was dedicated to you .
- The presents really tickled your enthusiasm and impatience.
- They were yet another exciting element in your whole new world of wonders and curiosities.
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A year passed by and along came the first birthday celebration for the new-comer; a simple gathering, celebrated with atok (grandfather), nenek (grandmother), auntie, mama and abah (father). You didn’t even know how to blow out the candle when we finished singing you your birthday song.
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..here comes solution for my grammar checking that i long searching for. thank very much for your help ma'am.
On the rest of the day, you climbed, you stumbled, you laughed and you cried as well, as you were the (earnest of an infant could be - I don't understand this part).
On the rest of the day, you climbed, you stumbled, you laughed and you cried as well, as you were the (earnest of an infant could be - I don't understand this part).
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as you were the ultimate toddler?
as you were a fine example of a happy, healthy toddler?
as you were a fine example of a happy, healthy toddler?
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