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Contiluo Posted 8 years ago
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Happiest time

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I think the happiest time in my life is when I was an elementary school student. At that time, I had no pressure from studying, and even didn’t need to worry when I got bad grades on tests. Thus, I had more time to relax than now; I could spend more time doing outside activities, such as playing basketball, hanging out with friends, or joining the school Athletics team.

  

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I think the happiest time in my life was when I was an elementary school student. At that time, I had no pressure from studying, and even didn’t need to worry when I got bad grades on tests. Thus, I had more time to relax than now.

  • I think the happiest time in my life was when I was an elementary school student.
  • At that time, I had no pressure from studying, and even didn’t need to worry when I got bad grades on tests.
  • Thus, I had more time to relax than now.
  • I could spend more time doing outside activities, such as playing basketball, hanging out with friends, or joining the school a thletics team.
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I think the happiest time in my life was when I was an elementary school student. At that time, I had no pressure from studying, and even didn’t need to worry when I got bad grades on tests. Thus, I had more time to relax than now. I could spend more time doing outside activities, such as playing basketball, hanging out with friends, or joining the school athletics team.

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